Steve. Thanks for your note. I think you are a very discerning editor. Your input has greatly helped. In the process I've found a more recent article that details more than the original I found (I tried twice to contact the lawyer and the journalist with no call back). I also was inspired to change it up a little with some personal "flashbacks." I'll show you the results. I am grateful and privileged to have had you give feedback on this article!! The first part wasn't very outstanding. I was basically paraphrasing and quoting articles I'd read.